Posted by: DreamSky


Hey Rainbow!

I know,
  you shine for me.
    While the crowd goes crazy,
      by the rhythm of your hues,
        your eyes are always searching for me.

          You want me to be
            the other half-circle of you.
              And I want to see
                all my happiness in you.

                 I get burned,
                  when lustful clouds surround.
                  I get drenched,
                  when your tears rain down.

                 I know,
                you stole all those colors
               to blend our dreams with it.
              And you painted it all over you,
             to be my mirror spirit.

          But still rainbow,

      You shine high above the sky,
    I creep on the ground.
  It hurts to know that
rainbow never shines in a round.

Rainbow was last modified: March 30th, 2008 by DreamSky

Blog Comments

  1. Agree with want more

    Nice Job….. few ppl are littering EU with meaningless Picnic stuffs…but I’m sure EU also has talented and creative contributers… keep it up my friend…want to see more frm you….

  2. grunoTina

    I see a dead body on the ground !
    Is he already dead? Is his spirit singing this rainbow song for her?
    Mysterious enough. loved it completely.

  3. Nite_Lite

    Very Ingenious, Very Real- “It hurts to know that
    rainbow never shines in a round”.

    I loved it!!! DreamSky, is truly full of life.

  4. DreamSky Post author

    Thank you all for appreciating my brief exploration into the other half-circle of rainbow. I used to be fascinated by her incompleteness since my childhood.

    Maybe the charcoal, who only knows the color black, does not deserve that colourful world – although they share the same canvas and sometimes she even loves to walk along the path charcoal sketches.

    Perhaps the beauty of the rainbow lies in the fact that she is single, incomplete – continuously missing the other half-circle.

    And Sudip u r right :smile: I was thinkin of THAT ‘time capsule’ from My Sassy Girl, while sketching that tree. Think how often do we get chance to see the rainbow :?:

  5. GGRRR8888888

    AWESOME !!!! I do agree wid gr8 . Everything is just greaattttttttt . Beautiful flow of painted dream in words. :wink: :grin:

  6. gr8

    I guess the half circle of the rainbow is preseted in the poem.

    Check the allignment of the text its curved so it represents the half circle of the rainbow

    so by joining two half circles it will create a full circle rainbow ..


  7. bishwa

    very insightful… the observation is great… everyone sees it but nobody notices “rainbow never shines in a round.” nice one…

    the art of shape poetry with colors of rainbow…cheers man!!

  8. GR8

    Gr8 poetry and the paint
    nice presentation of art in words

    DreamSky is really dreaming of sky and the soul..

    hope to see lot more paintings from DreamSky

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