God Never Realized

Posted by: Mr Sensible

God took you away from me,
But never knew the moments I shared with you will remain.
God took you away from me,
But never realized your soul was a part of mine.

How can I forget the warmth of the air which you breathed last;
How can I forget the moist of your lips when you kissed me last;
How can I forget the grip of your fingers when you hold me last;
How can I forget the dreams in your eyes when you closed your eyelids at the last;
How can I forget the possessed moments of our life and make them my past;

God took you away from me,
But never thought you can defy his will.
God took you away from me,
But never realized you can still visit me in my dreams.

(I always say to her “तिमी आउदै गर्नु”)

:idea: (Was written way back in 2000, and was published on web for the first time on 8th Dec 2008 in my blog.)

God Never Realized was last modified: February 24th, 2009 by Mr Sensible
 

Blog Comments

  1. ExclusivePieceofPoetry

    wahah wahhah great kisses, hugs, and closeness, I love you writer. I am falling in love with you. Please write your contact information. THANK YOU for those pain release. Same happened to me last year.

    Mr Sensible Writes:

    God took you away from me,
    But never knew the moments I shared with you will remain.
    God took you away from me,
    But never realized your soul was a part of mine.

    How can I forget the warmth of the air which you breathed last;
    How can I forget the moist of your lips when you kissed me last;
    How can I forget the grip of your fingers when you hold me last;
    How can I forget the dreams in your eyes when you closed your eyelids at the last;
    How can I forget the possessed moments of our life and make them my past;

    God took you away from me,
    But never thought you can defy his will.
    God took you away from me,
    But never realized you can still visit me in my dreams.

    (I always say to her “तिमी आउदै गर्नु”)

  2. jane

    I simply fell in love with the second stanza “How can I …”.

    Simply heart-touching n so romantic…

    Thanks for your illustration of how a SENSIBLE jumble of few words could depict intense feelings…

  3. तिमी आउदै गर्नु

    Simple choice of words, yet a bold challenge to the creator, GOD!!
    Touching and Nicely done, Mr Sensible.

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