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    Obscure

    Posted by C-roo on July 22nd, 2008 in Poetry

    A child lying at the corner

    crying at his fate.

    A face that reminds me

    of the lost happiness.

       

    Just tired of existing ruthless,

    it has many things to tell

    and yet, much more to hide.

    The innocence is lost amidst the burden

    upon the little shoulders.

      

    His pain needs to be seen

    His cries should have been heard,

    but who can pause for this little one

    and give a moment of comfort?

      

    His sighs vanish in the air,

    being left out - leaves him nowhere.

    His dreams twinkle in his eyes

    but soon, they get eroded with tears!

       

    A will to survive,

    pave way for his beliefs

    the need is courage, not sympathy

    for he hopes to succeed!

    Posted by C-roo on July 22nd, 2008 in Poetry
    (7 votes, average: 3.86 out of 5)
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    3 Responses to “ Obscure ”

    1. very nice Says:

      very nice! these children need courage, not just sympathy.

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    2. Ram Says:

      finally someone has written on this topic. we have to improve the way of thinking. Thanks!

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    3. AwsivNo Gravatar Says:

      nice one…

      i gave him a penny and he bought a cigarette
      i gave him food - he fought over the bread
      i gave him clothes - “its not enough”, he said
      i gave him boots but he cut and bled

      so i showed him the place
      where he could lie down and shed
      some tears of pain
      time and again

      i gave him attitude and his fear has fled
      i gave him hope and he hopes to be someone else…

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