goodbye
when the memories of the long gone
return, to break you down
and the expectations of the loved ones
open up the wounds profound
return, to break you down
and the expectations of the loved ones
open up the wounds profound
when you cry,
unable to stop the tears
you intend to hide,
remember me by your side
watching the drops form
at the corner of your eyes…
crying myself within
unable to bring the tears
i intend to hide
as they they flow through your eyes
and i pick them up
upon a fingertip
and whisper a thankful goodbye.
for they carry the pain
that’s burning you inside!
unable to stop the tears
you intend to hide,
remember me by your side
watching the drops form
at the corner of your eyes…
crying myself within
unable to bring the tears
i intend to hide
as they they flow through your eyes
and i pick them up
upon a fingertip
and whisper a thankful goodbye.
for they carry the pain
that’s burning you inside!
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July 1st, 2008 at 11:10 pm
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July 1st, 2008 at 11:29 pm
I like u poem..
reading ur poem compelled me to write something ..
Two drops of tear
Two drops of tear
Are sufficient
To describe how it pains
How your departure aches
My heart.
Two drops of tear
Are sufficient
To show my failure
To show my love
To you.
Two drops of tear
Are sufficient
To describe you
My all situation now
My all feelings
Towards you.
Two drops of tear
Aren’t sufficient
To wash my
All pains, all sorrows
That I’m facing now and
Maybe forever.
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July 1st, 2008 at 11:42 pm
@ Two Drops of Tear: Thanks for the wonderful lines you put in here… they express deep feelings… i feel good that what i wrote helped you write them
thanks again.
cheers!!
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July 2nd, 2008 at 12:23 am
Nice poem man…typical awsiv material (minus the rage
)
It’s easy to smile, and hide your tears
It’s easy to laugh, and hide those fears
And when the day is all and done
It’s just a simple goodbye, for all that is gone
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July 2nd, 2008 at 12:52 am
@xotg :
i can see that you have no problems with your “rhyming” now… great lines bro
and minus the rage huh? … i think it looks good for now
keep writing
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