Poem by Jyotsna
once again you ran far away..stealing my words..and dissapeared like smoke of
cigeratte..leaving me alone… deep inside the cascade i hide..all i ever want was ur just
lie..now i am burried alive…but i am more like you..drifted by myself by the sins of ur
unfaithfufulness..i have just become dead walking.
u went smiling and that was just probably the fake smile i didnt recognize at dark…wanted
to tell u a lot at last meet…knowing it will be the beginning of the end…wanted to kill
my silence but i m more like you…leaving on the hands of faith…now i nomore wanted to
suffer the pain and leave everything at the faiths hand…calling u wid both the arms
open…please accept it.
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 Posted by jyotsna in Poetry on June 16th, 2008 |
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June 16th, 2008 at 7:47 am
I am a cigarette lover waiting there with open arms in the heavens and hells surrounded by mystique, charisma and wealth waiting for your poem to be embraced by my soul.
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June 16th, 2008 at 7:50 am
being anti smoker I have faithful smile and lips and I have full light without darkness to behold your sublime senses.
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June 16th, 2008 at 10:09 am
Intricate feelings beautifully expressed….
starting .. “Once again …” and ending “… accept it (again?)” …. nicely bracketed
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June 17th, 2008 at 8:00 pm
This sexy poem has laready got 72 hits, thanks to poet. Nicely bracketed is good word. the poets open ended brackets need to be filled and gaps too should diminish, so the ultimate desire is fulfilled with arms from both sides hugging together in heaven or hell, so aliveness is seen in the poet.
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June 17th, 2008 at 11:02 pm
Hey thanks all for the comments.
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June 18th, 2008 at 4:43 am
nice one.keep it up. U seem to be gloomy by a betray.
Don’t think of it all the time.Then u’ll c the life more interesting.
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June 18th, 2008 at 7:40 am
Arms open… waiting for the fulfillment. waiting…
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June 20th, 2008 at 10:16 pm
hey jyotsna nice poem!!
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June 21st, 2008 at 6:18 pm
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October 24th, 2008 at 3:39 am
………Why do there is some one who always re grates on what they have done and what have went through their life at past ….And hoping that they will have the time to share and make the past the present….Please don’t re grate on what we have done and what we have passed through…………….Just make the present worthy……………………
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