Rainbow
Hey Rainbow!
I know,
you shine for me.
While the crowd goes crazy,
by the rhythm of your hues,
your eyes are always searching for me.
You want me to be
the other half-circle of you.
And I want to see
all my happiness in you.
I get burned,
when lustful clouds surround.
I get drenched,
when your tears rain down.
I know,
you stole all those colors
to blend our dreams with it.
And you painted it all over you,
to be my mirror spirit.
But still rainbow,
You shine high above the sky,
I creep on the ground.
It hurts to know that
rainbow never shines in a round.
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 Posted by DreamSky in Poetry on March 30th, 2008 |
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March 30th, 2008 at 6:03 pm
love the painting! awesome - mind blowing.
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March 30th, 2008 at 11:36 pm
nice!
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March 31st, 2008 at 2:10 am
Gr8 poetry and the paint
nice presentation of art in words
DreamSky is really dreaming of sky and the soul..
hope to see lot more paintings from DreamSky
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March 31st, 2008 at 2:17 am
Awesome!!!
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March 31st, 2008 at 2:57 am
very insightful… the observation is great… everyone sees it but nobody notices “rainbow never shines in a round.” nice one…
the art of shape poetry with colors of rainbow…cheers man!!
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March 31st, 2008 at 3:35 am
good one and nicely presented
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March 31st, 2008 at 5:23 am
I guess the half circle of the rainbow is preseted in the poem.
Check the allignment of the text its curved so it represents the half circle of the rainbow
so by joining two half circles it will create a full circle rainbow ..
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March 31st, 2008 at 6:33 am
DreamSky painting is GREAT!
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March 31st, 2008 at 7:34 am
Visual Effect.. Nice man. loved the color of Rainbow
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March 31st, 2008 at 9:10 pm
i liked the use of birds for eyes…nice
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April 1st, 2008 at 3:40 am
Awesome Sketch!! The poem compliments the composition of ART.
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April 1st, 2008 at 5:02 am
AWESOME !!!! I do agree wid gr8 . Everything is just greaattttttttt . Beautiful flow of painted dream in words.
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April 1st, 2008 at 11:55 am
my bro’s always best (y)
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April 3rd, 2008 at 9:08 pm
grrr8 sketch !!! 10 on 10 buddy ———-
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April 4th, 2008 at 9:03 am
Nice poem D !!!
well that tree reminds me of My Sassy Gril .. is that the same tree that u have painted ?
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April 6th, 2008 at 1:59 pm
Thank you all for appreciating my brief exploration into the other half-circle of rainbow. I used to be fascinated by her incompleteness since my childhood.
Maybe the charcoal, who only knows the color black, does not deserve that colourful world - although they share the same canvas and sometimes she even loves to walk along the path charcoal sketches.
Perhaps the beauty of the rainbow lies in the fact that she is single, incomplete - continuously missing the other half-circle.
And Sudip u r right
I was thinkin of THAT ‘time capsule’ from My Sassy Girl, while sketching that tree. Think how often do we get chance to see the rainbow 
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April 10th, 2008 at 9:49 am
i wonder how this dreamsky guy manages to be so multitalented!
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April 17th, 2008 at 10:39 am
[…] the colors and charcoal. Charcoal sketch desperately trying to be the second half circle of her.http://www.everestuncensored.org/2146/2008/03/30/rainbow/StoryPlace Pre-school Library: Color the RainbowPre-school Library · Color the rainbow · […]
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April 20th, 2008 at 11:19 pm
[…] the colors and charcoal. Charcoal sketch desperately trying to be the second half circle of her.http://www.everestuncensored.org/2146/2008/03/30/rainbow/Saving Contrast poem by Rose Loya on AuthorsDenMay 5, 2007 … Saving Contrast, Momentary movement […]
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April 29th, 2008 at 12:33 am
Very Ingenious, Very Real- “It hurts to know that
rainbow never shines in a round”.
I loved it!!! DreamSky, is truly full of life.
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May 14th, 2008 at 11:41 am
I see a dead body on the ground !
Is he already dead? Is his spirit singing this rainbow song for her?
Mysterious enough. loved it completely.
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