Got to drink today
- Sanat Acharya
Today I worked a lot
I saw the sun at both ends of horizon
Sore are joints, brains cannot plot
My feet feel like carrying a ton
There is a bottle shop on my way
To erase this tiredness, I got to drink today
Today I performed great in school
I achieved all round excellence
I am exited! I got to keep it cool
I fear if my thoughts go nonsense
Yes! There is a bottle shop on my way
To calm down myself, I got to drink today
Today I did nothing mentionable
I met no one, did no job, wrote nothing
This loss of time is absolutely irritable
I am upset and can’t concentrate on a thing
Good! There is a bottle shop on my way
To regain my concentration, I got to drink today
Today I have no complaint, I did okay
Neither I did awesome, nor was I bad
But I am confused what should I say
When subconscious ask- Happy or sad
Thanks! There is a bottle shop on my way
To solve this confusion, I got to drink today
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March 14th, 2008 at 11:50 pm
Good one Sanat, It sounds very spontaneous and I like. Keep it up.
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March 15th, 2008 at 4:47 am
cheers my friend,
i’m on my way
got lots of things to say
i’ll grab a bottle on the way
yeah, i too got to drink today
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March 15th, 2008 at 6:04 am
hey bro,,nice poem,.didnt know u were poetic,,nways good on ya ,i feel like a drink now
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March 15th, 2008 at 7:15 am
Bro ~
Ramro cha ra mileko cha….lekhna sakchau bhane thaha thiyena
we want more from you….
khana ko lagi kina bhahana chahiyo ra!
i didn’t get to drink today
so i drink today!
cheers
binu
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March 15th, 2008 at 9:13 am
dami 6 santa tero poem la ta mero dil chiyo
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March 15th, 2008 at 9:48 am
d’ya drink….lol????
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March 15th, 2008 at 10:04 am
No matter what happens, got to drink today! Good one.
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March 15th, 2008 at 10:58 am
Hei..
I didn’t knew u were so poetic and from when did you started writing coz before i have never heard any such things from you…but anyway it was good and keep on writing something every now and then…
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March 16th, 2008 at 12:47 am
I will join u any time just let me know where good one
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March 16th, 2008 at 6:25 am
Welll i am not sure if this is exactly a poem or just day by day passing by kind of a thing.. but i guess its just out of nowhere kind of a writing. Not very constructive and there is no flow … so need to improve a lot my fren…
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March 17th, 2008 at 1:40 am
poem with bad lesson
no one shud drink that often
maddyapan swastha ko lagi hanikarak cha!!!
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March 17th, 2008 at 4:35 am
nay!!
i don’t hink u understand what he means to say
if you wanna be happy, be happy today
if you got a heart so heavy - you better cry today
but if you can’t do this, i guess
yo got a heart made of clay!
*hic*
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March 17th, 2008 at 4:55 am
thanks biswa
i want to add your lines as the last verse of ma poem mate…
cheers mate
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March 17th, 2008 at 6:22 am
sure man, if you like it you can use it.
cheers!!
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March 17th, 2008 at 7:02 am
WOW! sir i didn’t know u were so intellectual and a drunkard?????? Anyways i was already a fan of yours now…………….. even more fan of urs. keep it up and hey CHEERS !!!!!!
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March 17th, 2008 at 7:45 am
cheersss Santay….To solve the confusion, I also got to drink today………heheheheheh
I have known u from the past seven yrs…but i knew as a good fren,a good student,a good
cricketer,a good footballer,and most of all a good human being…but today i am get shocked by
reading this poem….u r also a very good poet hummmmmmmmmm
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March 18th, 2008 at 5:29 am
Beiman, 4yr sangai padhera pani afno talent show nagarne!!!
Anyway, poem was great and love to read more from you. Keep posting.
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