….तर मन त पत्थरकै जाती
जीवनको गोरेटोमा बाधा अनि अड्चनहरुमाझ
अल्झिएर पछारीनु त छँदैछ साथी
चर्किन सक्छ, चोइटिन सक्छ यो मन
….तर मन त पत्थरकै जाती।
.
प्रहार त पक्कै सहनु पर्छ, समयको नियतिको भाग्यको
चोट सहनुपर्दा चोटै चोट माथि
कुच्चिन सक्छ, टुक्रिन सक्छ यो मन
….तर मन त पत्थरकै जाती।
.
सुखै सुख त कसलाई पो लेखेको होला र
अनेकौ ब्यथा कष्ट र पिडाले पाउँदा सास्ती
डढ्न सक्छ, पग्लन सक्छ यो मन
….तर मन त पत्थरकै जाती।
.
घाउ देख्दा मल्हम हैन नुन चुक छर्ने पनि छन यहाँ
पाउँदा घात धोका अनि लान्छनाहरु नाना भाँति
गिथलिन सक्छ, चुडिन सक्छ यो मन
….तर मन त पत्थरकै जाती।
.
अनेकौं बोझ समस्या र दिक्दारीका खातका खात
पश्चातापको भार त कति कति
भाँचिन सक्छ, लाछिन सक्छ यो मन
….तर मन त पत्थरकै जाती।
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 Posted by nabaraj in Poetry on September 15th, 2007 |
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September 15th, 2007 at 11:43 pm
Very well expressed and thoughtful. Also it reads well. Keep it up…
Yestai Ho
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September 17th, 2007 at 1:55 am
nice poem naba!!!
mann ta pathar kai jaati…
kambkhat ye dil naam ki chij khuda ne kyu banayi…
na ye dil hota, na dard aur gum ka ehsaas hota..
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September 21st, 2007 at 1:11 am
well written poem. excellent words and rhymes quite well too. I guess in this world we must have a “mann” of at least 25% “patthar” and rest 75% normal. or else the “mann” might breakdown too often even with the slight hardship. so I will go for 1/4 “patthar” ko mann and 3/4 real “mann”. this i guess will be the best solution. what do u think about my idea. basically my idea is NOT to be machine fully but only partly so that life could be tackeled a little better. waiting for any comments.
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September 21st, 2007 at 1:17 am
can I say 2 things first? 1. very well written poem about the “mann” and 2. what an excellent assessment from basu.
well spotted basu. now days u won’t be able to live happy with the “mann” which is not tough enough. i 100% agree that soft person suffers more in this world. its time ti be a “tough” person but not extremely tough though. we don want to lose our emotional aspects too! go for the balance. toughen up a bit. or else life is tough for u. iron cuts the iron.
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September 21st, 2007 at 1:31 am
good work..blogs are running short of poems..this poem stands out..and good comments too.
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September 21st, 2007 at 5:26 am
कमलो भन्दा पत्थर भएकै जाति
प्रहार हुन्छ नै ढाल हुनु पर्छ छाति
- गोपाल योन्जन (?)
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