Life in my view
Just like the waves in the ocean
Rising high to touch the sky
Just like impulses in the brain
Impact for seconds and ready to die
Just like name written on shore
Fighting to exist cheap to vanish
Just like old face in new mirror
No glow how much u tarnish
Just like prisoner of own mind
No restriction but searching for freedom
Just like king of own thoughts
Respected in dreams but no kingdom
Just like endless walk in desert
Escorted by colorful illusions
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 Posted by Kapil Raj Pandey in Poetry on May 9th, 2007 |
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May 9th, 2007 at 3:35 am
a haiku -
Dear poet, in my view
This poem sucks
And so do you.
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May 9th, 2007 at 8:07 am
hey Basho, you are a bozo. Negative commentators like you who even can’t complete a sentence will never succeed in life. If you have courage, please write a paragrpah to support your argument. Do not write a sentence like an idiot do and pass judgement on somebody else’s work. Go get life.
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May 13th, 2007 at 10:49 am
Those, who not know how to express comprehensively, write ambiguous lines and call themselves poets. I think lazy people write poems. Please spend time and write in paragrpahs.
Yestai Ho
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May 19th, 2007 at 1:36 am
Yestai ho, how can you protray a person by his poems? Were laxmi Devkota, Shiromani Lekhnath all were able to produce good poems by being lazy? Kapil Pandey may be another such lazy who tries writing poems in Nepali language next time as Being a Nepali he may not rule english poems.
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