नारी …

Posted by: santosh

जती पियो पिउँ लाग्ने नारी कुवाको पानी हो |
जति लिएर पनि नसकिने नारी मायाकी खानी हो |
तर किन ?
मेरो जीवनमा त नारी टुकुचाको पानी भो …
धेरै मलाई आँसु दिईन, सायद उनको गाग्रो खाली भो …

जती बर्णन गरेपनि नसकिने नारी देवीको रूप हो |
जति तापेर पनि प्यास नमेटिने नारी ठण्डीको धुप हो |
तर किन ?
मेरो जीवनमा त नारी नरसँहार मच्चाउने काली भो …
धेरै मलाई आँसु दिईन, सायद उनको गाग्रो खाली भो …

जती चाहेर पनि छुट्न नसक्ने नारी आधा ज्यान हो |
जती लिएर पनि नसकिने नारी ठूलो ज्ञानको भण्डारण हो |
तर किन ?
मेरो जीवनमा त नारी, खै कति भनुँ, उनैलाई चढाएको वलि भो …
धेरै मलाई आँसु दिईन, सायद उनको गाग्रो खाली भो …

नारी … was last modified: December 23rd, 2014 by santosh
 

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  1. no name

    Santosh, timi aaja timi aja mahan bhayechau…
    Nari lai balla po chinechau…

    Maya ma aasu bhagaune ma aba timi pani parechau…

  2. lpk

    I found that the great poet did not too correctly recognize the Womenhood, or Nari, or the LadyShip. She has more of those things that she can bestow upon you, or, me or, everyone.
    She is Ocean, Universe, and mother of all the pleasures, panis, and everything, so, She is the creator, the generator, Source, and oracle.
    She gives birth and encompasses all virtues to those who worship her, like our poet.
    Please beg for charm,sweetness, and love, not tears.
    If SHE did not have Tears in your presumed wmpty vessel, she could not have given you those tears from that empty matter.
    Emptiness can beget nothing.
    When one is full, one can bestow it for other’s benefit.
    SHE found that you are suitable for shedding her TEARS. You Did not know how to get the LOVE, the smiles, the pleasures, ecstasys of life, which can overwhelm even best of the happy moments that surpasses entire universe of universe.
    Please learn from other GREAT Poets as well on Women, LADYSHip, LOVE, Romance, and Psychology residing within.

  3. Yestai Ho

    This is awesome. Good job Santosh. You are truly poetic. Compare the “I love you” poem by Indra with this one. Reader will see the quality difference. Indra should think hard beofre posting any poem. His poem has no feeling. You are awesome Santosh.

    Yestai Ho

  4. Kamlex

    Nari is like a river that doesn’t have any destination.
    She is like an amoeba that doesn’t have any shape.
    So your feeling kuwa seems to be wrong.
    Next time drink another kuwa ko pani
    And write a poem on another nani.

    Be cool man and try for river and then sea if possible. Otherwise remember Bagmati which is known as a pabitramati and one of the biggest river but we can have difficulty on finding water there.

    I love it when I am in pain…coz it makes me forget her.
    Give yourself a Chance….compromises are done by looser.

  5. Anil Sharma

    सन्तोस जी,

    आसु र हासोको दुबैको पीडा बीचित्रको हुंदो रहेछ।
    खुब राम्रो संग मनको भावनालाई तपाईले कोरेको पाए
    खुसी लाग्यो पद्धेर,

    मनको बह…
    नत काटेर काटीनी
    नत फालेर फालीनी
    जेहोस् लेखदै गर्नु होला…

    जो रमेको छ …
    सोध उसलाई !
    जुन के उदायो ?

    जो गुमेको छ…
    सोध उसलाई !
    रात के बीतायो ?

    जो पीयको छ…
    सोध उसलाई!
    आशु के बगायो ?

    जो डुबेको छ…
    सोध उसलाई!
    मन के बुजायो ?

    हुन त आ-आफ्नो भाका हो ;)
    खै के-के पायो ?
    अनी के-के घुमायो ?

  6. Santosh

    Dovan,

    कसरी थाहा भयो तिमीलाई मेरो नानीदेखीको बानी…
    दुखेको घाउमा किन नून छरछउ ए नानी…

    अरुको दु: खमा साथ दिने राख तिमी बानी…
    येसबाट हुन्दैन तिम्रो जीबनमा कुनै हानी…

  7. dovan

    मायाको खानी, टुकुचाको पानी,
    जे भने पनि केटी जिस्काउने संतोष दाइको नानीदेखिको बानी …
    तर किन ?
    आज वहांलाई यस्तो बैराग अनि गुनासो भो …
    शायद वहाले थुप्रै गाग्रीको पानि खानुभो..

    ; )

  8. Anjana

    Very good Santosh.
    For those who desire, women are कुवाको पानी, मायाकी खानी, देवीको रूप, ठण्डीको धुप, आधा ज्यान, ठूलो ज्ञानको भण्डारण
    and for those who don’t, women are
    टुकुचाको पानी,नरसँहार मच्चाउने काली, उनैलाई चढाएको वलि

    aasu nai nahune maya ta ke hola ra?
    jaba samma timro prem cha, mero gagri khali ke hola ra??

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